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Welcome to my blog! This is my journey, my first steps into the world of fictional writing. This blog is an online journal of sorts, where I share the progress of my work as well as what I have learned along the way. I hope you enjoy your time with me and that my experience may be of some use to you.

Wednesday, December 2, 2015

5k Thank you.


Good day Everyone!
 
       After posting my latest update this morning, my blog has reached a new milestone: five thousand views! I am so grateful for the support and interest everyone has shown to my blog. I want to thank everyone who has stopped by to see what I am doing, learn from my research and mistakes, and keep track of my journey to have my first individual work published. 
 
       As my previous thank you note, here is a list of  stats from my blog. These are the top countries who visited my site, I would mention more, but Blogger only gives me the top ten.
  • 2849  = United States (up 1594)
  • 765    = Canada  (up 247)
  • 543    = Slovakia (up 463)
  • 299    = Russia (up 279)
  • 67      = Ukraine (up 40)
  • 60      = Germany (up 47)
  • 52      = Sweden (up 46)
  • 48      = France (up 24)
  • 16      = Singapore (up 16)
  • 13      = United Kingdom (up 7)


       It really means a lot to me to know so many people dropped by. I am also stunned to see  which countries seem to be most interested (had a big increase from Slovakia and Russia). Again, thank you, it is truly encouraging. For those of you wanting to help me out even more, be sure to like my Facebook Page! 


I hope I can live up to your expectations! Until next time.




Humbly yours,



Patrick Osborne

Current Projects Part 11

Welcome Back!


The inevitable has happened… we expect it, dread it, we even plan for it every year, but in the end we are never truly ready for it. I am speaking of course of… our first snowfall! It arrived overnight in this last week of November, draping everything in white. I will admit, I have a love/hate relationship with winter. I like the look of snow and the peaceful air it brings to one's surroundings. On the other hand, snow means having to clear the driveway and driving in terrible conditions, two of my least favorite things. At least I have a snowblower now, so it takes the sting out of one of those two points (but only a little).


Let it snow!


Also, snow usually announces the coming of my favorite time of the year; Christmas! By now most of my holiday shopping is done and the Christmas decorations are being planned for the first week of December. You can expect all of this holiday buzz to inspire most of this month's content.


It’s beginning to look a lot like Christmas.


So here is what I have been up to so far.


I lost most of the pictures saved on my laptop when it decided to go belly up last month. This means I had to start from scratch, getting more pictures for upcoming Inspiration posts. Luckily, this is the time of year my wife Linda has a lot of vendor events, giving me the opportunity to go exploring. In order to learn about more interesting locations to explore, I have applied to a website called OAP (Ontario Abandoned Places), which is meant for other explorers to post where they have been.


            In terms of reading material, I couldn’t find anything suitable for the holiday season. I was hoping to get my hands on a copy of “Merry Christmas, Alex Cross” by James Patterson, but couldn’t locate it in my families pile of books. So instead I have been reading other books as I usually would. For December, I decided to do something different for the book review by discussing a graphic novel I was gifted last year.


            The only work I have done this month in regards to Missing Worlds Media, was review other peoples content. My focus has mainly been on helping other writers better understand content I had contributed to, so they could incorporate it in their work. The company in general has made good progress, as they showed in a recent news release showing new maps.




            Another article I plan on doing this month is my first 100 for 100 post. This content was originally meant to be posted once my facebook page reached one hundred likes. Though that is still pretty far from happening, I did manage to cross two other milestones: my Twitter account is now over a thousand followers and my blog will pass the five thousand views. As a thank you for all of your support, a short story about content in my story will be posted.


            As for my own book, I have started fleshing out the motives for my main villains and their dastardly plans. The original goals I had in mind began sounding too simplistic for the villainous mastermind type character I was envisioning. I wanted him to be bigger than life, so it made sense that his plans needed to be well thought out and not so straightforward. This idea came to me as I was working on the comic book project at my work.


Speaking of which, my job at copyright is going well. This comic book project has given me the opportunity to talk with people in the field and be exposed to companies I had never heard of before. I’m am truly excited about the end result of this project, and can’t wait to share more details with you all!


Happy Holidays!


            On that note, I would like to end this month's update by wishing you all an early Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays.


Until next time.


Cheers,

Patrick Osborne

Friday, November 27, 2015

BOOTCAMP LESSON 8: Dialogue tags


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Time for another installment of BOOTCAMP! This month we will focus on dialogue tags, a subject I covered earlier this month. The goal of today’s game will be to see how different tags can affect dialogue.




Lesson 8: Dialogue tags



Dialogue tags serve to indicate who’s speaking in a written text, which is important when a large group of characters are involved in a scene; the more people taking part in a conversation, the greater the need for dialogue tags to identify the speakers.


The tags are usually composed of at least one speaker and a verb in order to accomplish their purpose. However, we can also use them to help accentuate dialogue, control tension, clarify information or describe actions.


The goal of this writing exercise will be to take the two offered scenarios and their corresponding conversations and add dialogue tags to them. If you want to make things interesting, come up with at least two different sets of tags for each scenario, which will change the conversations tone while staying true to their original theme.


So here are today's guidelines!


  1. Below are two scenarios to work with.
  2. Following each scenario is a short conversation.
  3. Write tags and punctuation for each line of dialogue.
  4. The tags must help reflect the tone and subject of the scenario.


Scenario 1:

Hospital room


Ana is sitting in a hospital bed, typing away on her laptop. She has spent the last few days in intensive care, recuperating for a serious injury. Ana notices John entering the room to visit her. Even though John saved Ana’s life, he was also responsible for the accident that injured her in the first place.  


  • John: Hey Ana
  • Ana: Come in John
  • John: How are you feeling
  • Ana: Well, right now I don’t know if I should kiss you or kill you
  • John: I’m sorry
  • Ana: Don’t be, not like it was entirely your fault. Besides, I’d be dead right now if it weren’t for you


Scenario 2:


coffee, shop, business, interior, inside, summit
Coffee shop


John is sitting at a table in a coffee shop, working on a school assignment on his laptop. His friend Evan arrives, looking like he was out partying all night, and takes a seat next to him. John is trying to concentrate on his work while Evan tries to start a conversation.


  • Evan: What have you been up to. You said you’d come by my place.
  • John: Sorry Evan, I have to finish this assignment. It’s due by Friday.
  • Evan: So. You still have 4 days to work on it.
  • John: Today is wednesday, that party was two days ago.
  • Evan: Oh yeah.
  • John: Besides, I’m almost done, I just need to read through it again and check for mistakes.
  • Evan: So what you’re saying is that you’re done, just to anal to let it go.


For those who aren’t afraid to share their entries, feel free to submit your backstories as a reply to this post, or send them to me privately. I may create a new page on my blog for submissions.


Remember, this is a game, so no posting bad comments about other people's entries. Hope you have fun giving this exercise a try. Until next time!


Cheers,


Patrick Osborne

Monday, November 23, 2015

Inspiration Part 7 - Forests


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As I mention in this month’s Current Projects post, I lost all of the photos that were being saved up for future Inspiration articles when my laptop had an unforeseen BSOD issue. Until I can go out and get more pictures (or at least revisit the sites I had gone to), I will be forced to use older pictures I had saved elsewhere, or content from other sources.


As for a subject, it came to me after having written a few posts for November. Earlier this month, I was at a loss when it came to a theme, but one finally surfaced as I was revising my Current Projects and By the Book entries: Forests.


© Linda Little 2015


    One of my favorite spots in the world is the Opeongo Mountain resort, where our family goes camping every year. The pictures which will be displayed here are from the various woodlands on or surrounding the campground, taken during different times of the year (between May and October), so they will vary in appearance. Hope you enjoy them.


    First, we will take a look at the most prominent aspect of a forest: trees. I won’t go into extreme details on the components, types and such, or else this post would be taking up several hundred pages. Besides, how many of us actually know all that much about trees? These are details that not every character in the story you are telling should know. So instead, I will stick to what “Joe Everyman” would notice at a glance.


© Linda Little 2015






© Linda Little 2015

© Linda Little 2015

© Linda Little 2015




Paying close attention to trunks, branch formations, bark texture, shape and color of leaves, are all details than can help scenery descriptions in a story. Unfortunately, since most of these photos were taken in the same general area, I do not have a large variety of flora to show you.
What is most obvious from the following pictures is the difference between trees in a forest, and trees in a field. When surrounded by something that is obstructing their source of light (like other trees), a trees will shoot straight up in order to try and get as much light as possible. Whereas trees in the middle of a field or lot will spread its branches in every direction.


Before using descriptions of vegetation in your story, I recommend doing research online or, even better, go out and get a closer look yourself.


Next we have water. The following pictures will show different bodies of water found near Opeongo Resort, such as Clear Lake and Bonnechere Valley River. Water will look and feel different depending on the source, so it is important to pay attention to it when trying to describe it in writing.








© Linda Little 2015



© Linda Little 2015

© Linda Little 2015

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© Linda Little 2015

© Linda Little 2015

Again, I did not have much variety in these pictures from camping (just one river and one lake), so in order to add a little more contrast, I included a few pictures of a swamp called Mer Blue Bog (photos courtesy of Linda). The pictures help give us a better idea of the difference between standing and cascading water.


For the last section of this post, I included a few random close up shots. These pictures really help us appreciate the details we can find in nature.





© Linda Little 2015


© Linda Little 2015

© Linda Little 2015


© Linda Little 2015


© Linda Little 2015

© Linda Little 2015



Getting a good feel for describing a forest setting can be important to a large variety of stories, such a Sword & Sorcery type fantasies, Horror stories taking place in isolated settings or Historical tales which happened before the arrival of technology.


That is all for this month's Inspiration post. In closing I would like to thank my wife Linda, for helping me by supplying some of the photos that were used in this post.


Until next time.


Cheers

Patrick Osborne.